narrative and illustration # 2 – evidence of action

“Produce one photograph in which it can be seen that something has happened. As a suggestion, include in the photograph something that has been either broken, or emptied”  – AoP Coursebook

Digging Dug

Not a set up shot, but rather then end of an afternoon’s digging out the borders when the sunlight had sunk to the point where it no longer lit the brick air-raid shelter, but was still pointing up the uneven, freshly dug earth. It’s fairly obvious what has happened and the angles of lines running through the frame and the division of the space work nicely, I think, but it would be better if the pile of dug up grass and other weeds was more obviously different from the raggedy lawn which only got cut the next weekend.

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